Thursday, August 8, 2013

Out of Class Essay #2 (Poetry & History Analysis)

Bradford Nicholl
July 17, 2013
Compare and Contrast "Indian Cartography" and "Itch Like Crazy: Resistance"
 
Native Americans have been removed from their lands by white settlers for a vast number of years. As a result, Native Americans have been suffering from the inability to revisit their childhood origins or to experience their culture. Deborah E. Miranda and Wendy Rose are two poets, authors of “Indian Cartography” and “Itch Like Crazy: Resistance,” respectively. These two authors, themselves, are Native Americans who are suffering from their cultural loss. Miranda writes of the destruction of her father's childhood home that white settlers have caused and the depressing effects it has on her and her father. Rose takes a more personal approach and writes about overhearing plans for the removal of Native Americans, describes the devastating effects it has on her and others, and vents her frustration. While Miranda carries a sorrowful tone and Rose conveys an angered tone, they share the same historical theme in that the culture and origins of Native Americans were destroyed by white settlers. The authors accomplish this through similes, metaphors, alliteration, imagery, and symbolism.

Miranda begins the first stanza of her poem, “Indian Cartography,” with two similes to emphasize the importance of their heritage and introduce a tragedy caused by white settlers. The first simile reads, “my father opens a map of California – / traces mountain ranges, rivers, county borders / like family bloodlines.” Here she is relating traces on a map to family bloodlines. This simile brings attention to the significance of these traces, and describes them as something family-related. Thus, we can infer that the traces have something important to do with their culture and heritage. In addition, since bloodlines allow blood to flow through it and travel, we can infer that the traces have to do with tracing back their culture to its origins. Note that alliteration can be found in the quote as well, to further brighten the simile and emphasize the importance of the locations traced on the map. In a second simile, Miranda writes, “places he was happy, / or where tragedy greeted him / like an unpleasant relative.” Describing the locations that were traced on the map, this quote informs that not all traces represent locations of good times, but may locate times of disaster, using a simile to compare them to being greeted by an unpleasant relative. The use of this simile introduces the concept of a tragedy having occurred in the past, and emphasizes the negativity that will come to one of these locations: the flooding of his childhood home in the valley by white settlers from a dam project.

Wendy Rose makes use of a metaphor in her poem, “Itch Like Crazy: Resistance,” to demonstrate her anger and convey her message to resist the white settlers. Rose states, “this is one of those days / when I see Columbus / in the eyes of nearly everyone.” This metaphor relates Christopher Columbus to white settlers she sees around. Discovering the route to America, Columbus was a Spanish explorer essentially responsible for introducing white colonization on the country, which led to the removal of Native Americans from their lands and cultures. By comparing him to white settlers that she sees, Rose is showing how she views whites to be an enemy. This gives an insight to the anger she has towards whites as they push her and other Native Americans off of their land.

Several occasions of alliteration arise in “Indian Cartography” to emphasize the depressing effect the destruction of the father's childhood home plays on him. The first instance of alliteration recounts his youth, “days he walked across the silver scales / swollen bellies of salmon coming back / to a river that wasn't there.” This quote describes the father as a child, crossing a river filled with salmon and their silver scales. These salmon have swollen bellies, indicating they are preparing to spawn, or deposit eggs. The words, silver, scales, swollen, and salmon, bring attention to the preciousness of the flow of Salmon along the river and the baby fish soon to come. This emphasizes the loss that has occurred from the destruction by white settlers. Another case of alliteration enters the father's dreams, “when he comes to the valley / drowned by a displaced river / he swims out, floats on his face / with eyes open, looks down into lands not drawn on any map.” In his dream, the father is floating on the lake peering down into the water where his home use to be. This gives the image as if he is lost, separated from his childhood home and cultural origins. The words, drowned, displaced, floats, face, down, and drawn, attract attention to bring out the tragedy of the destruction of his home by white settlers, even stating that it is no longer drawn on any map, but replaced by a lake, drowning the region. This greatly brings out the sorrow in the tone of the poem. 

Itch Like Crazy: Resistance” contains many example of imagery that conveys Rose's anger toward white settlers. One major example of imagery reads, “every ring on Turtle's Back / a mortar to split our seeds, / every sunflower bursting from asphalt / raises green arms to the sun, / every part of Tewaquachi / has formed the placenta / from which we emerge, / every red thing in the world / is the reflection of blood, / our death and our rising.” This phrase provides imagery describing how the Native Americans and herself are adapted to their land and their culture, only to have it taken from them by white settlers. The use of imagery helps to connect the reader with the feelings that she experiences and to understand her anger. Immediately after, Rose follows with an additional major example of imagery, stating, now I dance the mission revolts again, / let the ambush blossom in my heart, / claim my victory with their own language, / know the strength of spine tied to spine, / recognize him when he arrives again, / this hungry one, must feed him / poisoned fish.” Here she is using imagery to describe how she desires to resist the white settlers from removing them from their land, and how she will fight to protect that land and her culture. The use of imagery helps to demonstrate her anger toward the white settlers and how she plans to fight to resist being removed from her land.

Miranda throws in a major play on symbolism near the end of “Indian Cartography” to show her acceptance of the past, as well as to show the impact that it leaves. She predicts of what the father views as he peers into the lake, saying, “maybe he sees shadows / of a people who are fluid, / fluent in dark water, bodies / long and glinting with sharp-edged jewelry, / and mouths still opening, closing / on the stories of our home.” First of all, we can see that a metaphor is used to relate the people from that area to the Salmon in the lake, describing them with great imagery. We can also note that she refers to the father's home as being “our home,” to include her, explaining that her father's culture is a part of her as well. The symbolism comes in as she speaks of the mouths of the Salmon opening and closing. A fish will open and close its mouth to breathe as it takes in water and pushes it out of its gills. Since we have to breathe in order to live, and the Salmon represent the people of that area, the breathing of the fish symbolizes the lives of those people. While the Salmon are breathing on the stories of their home, as Miranda states, this symbolizes those people living on their stories. In other words, these people can only live off of the stories rather than experience their culture first-hand, greatly impacting the culture of the Native Americans. However, Miranda tells us this calmly, seeming to accept the fact that their home has been destroyed by the white settlers, and that she will only experience the stories.

Symbolism is also found in “Itch Like Crazy: Resistance,” with the purpose of emphasizing Rose's anger toward white settlers for their removal of Native Americans from their land. After overhearing that she and the Native Americans will be removed from their land, she writes, “the terror crouches there in the canyon of my hands, / the pink opening rosebud mouths / of newborns or the helplessness / of the primal song.” This quote symbolizes her anger toward whites settlers. The terror is crouching as if about to pounce, representing her anger about to snap and fight back. She imagines the babies who will be lost from their cultural origins unless she resists, or she can sing the primal song which she understands is helpless. This use of symbolism brings out her anger and shows that the white settlers have pushed her to the edge, aiding in creating an angered tone in the poem.

Deborah E. Miranda seems to posses a calm, sorrowful tone, accepting of what took place while Wendy Rose seems to have an angered tone, ready to resist the white settlers. These tones were generated through various similes, metaphors, alliteration, imagery, and symbolism, as we have seen. While Miranda and Rose convey two entirely different tones, they share the same historical theme in that the culture and origins of Native Americans were destroyed by white settlers. After reading these poems, we should be motivated to protect the land of Native Americans and preserve their culture, which have both been decimated by white settlers.

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